Sometimes I don't know why

BY ROSE LU (冰花)

Sometimes I don't know why

I just feel so sad

I wish someone could read my mind

Come and stop by my side



Sometimes I don't know why

I just feel so confined

I wish someone could share my feelings

Come and ferry me out of this island



Sometimes I don't know why

I just feel so upset

I wish someone could understand my heart

Come and give me a hand


I hope you are that someone
my sweet dream in the distant land


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第一次TRY英文的, 请大家给改改:


Sometimes I don't know why

BY ROSE LU

Sometimes I don't know why

I just feel so sad

I wish someone could read my mind

Come and stop by my side



Sometimes I don't know why

I just feel so confined

I wish someone could share my feelings

Come and ferry me out of this island



Sometimes I don't know why

I just feel so upset

I wish someone could understand my heart

Come and give me a hand



I hope that you are the someone

my sweet dreamer in the distant land

http://www.bachinese.com/forum/read.php?tid=7373

不知道为什么

冰花 译

不知道为什么
有时我是如此的哀伤
渴望有人解读我的思绪
陪伴在我的身旁


不知道为什么
有时我感到如同被囚
渴望有人懂得我的感觉
渡我出孤岛


不知道为什么
有时我感到是如此的担忧
渴望有人懂得我的心情
把我拯救

多么希望你是那个人
我甜蜜而遥远的梦想

很感谢梦文等的鼓励和非马老师的肯定和修改!

我们都有这样的梦啊.

可有时,当人真的遇到知音, 又害怕了, 不愿再走近一步. 为什么?

我说的走近, 是指心的距离.

拯救?

如梦,

谢谢你啊! 我就没找到"拯"'字!

你帮我大忙啦.

为什么?

是不是怕背上沉重的十字架?

内心的渴望和梦想多数还是有的, 爱写作的人就可以化作文字吧!

冰花在现实和梦想中穿行。

哈哈,

上电脑作诗.
下电脑做饭.

如何?

其实我们这些行走在文字上的人都一样, 把文字作为现实和梦想的桥梁, 文字代表我们的思绪穿行在现实和梦想中!
穿行中我们交叉相逢~~~

binghua: Sometimes I don't know why?

tugan: I never know why?

searain: Better than always ask why me, why...?!

It's good for a first time writer.

梦想也是生活的一部分.
认真梦想, 也是认真生活.

哈哈, 现在我不SAD和UPSET 了, BECAUSE 土干 COME BY MYSIDE!

今天是农历元月十五, 给海雨拜个晚年!

祝你猪年诸事风调雨顺!!

哈哈, "Better than always ask why me, why...?!  "

谢谢!

问海外逸士好!

元宵节快乐!

谢谢您的评点和夸奖!

但愿这不是我的最后一首英文诗~~~

嗯, 百合的话很有哲理啊!

很深刻!

元宵节快乐!