Can match the warmth of a
heartbeat flowing in the air
Is it your gazing after the
fierce wind blowing
Which can make my fearful and
mixed anxiety easy to bear
The long-awaited autumn
rainfall
Turning the falling colorful
leaves into an earthly shrine
It’s your affectionate eyes in
the mist of rain
Through the muddiness,
overpowers with a colourful shine
The bleak forest, with tall
trees towering into clouds
It's getting dark, and it’s
becoming lonely before it turns cold
A lovesickness, with a moment
of hesitation
Fascinated by a happy yet
unpredictable story to unfold
Love is a promise
delivered
And there’s no regret for the
ever-enduring affection
When rain splatters on the
fallen leaves
It’s the tears of gratitude
for the long-expected connection
With a ruler that spans time
and space
Measure the weight-worth of
sunshine, life and happiness
With a slightly juvenile
rhetoric
Flick away the traces of tears
flowing in darkness
Let the whisper in my thoughts
spread
Add a little indulgence to the
autumn colors of arts
Wind, eagerly awaits in the
cool air
Soon to knock on the door of
love, lingering in our hearts
根据分析,我修改如下(这里我不管词语的选择和翻译的对错)
What kind of admirable greeting
Can match the warmth of a heartbeat flowing in the air
Is it your gazing after the fierce wind blowing
That makes my fearful and mixed anxiety easy to bear
The long-awaited autumn rainfall
Turns the falling colorful leaves into an earthly shrine
It’s your affectionate eyes in the mist of rain
Through the muddiness, that overpowers with a colourful shine
In the bleak forest, tall trees tower into clouds
It's getting dark, and becoming lonely before turning cold
A lovesickness, with a moment of hesitation
Is fascinated by a happy yet unpredictable story to unfold
Love is a promise delivered
And there’s no regret for the ever-enduring affection
The rain that splatters on the fallen leaves
Are tears of gratitude for the long-expected connection
With a ruler that spans time and space
Measure the weight-worth of sunshine, life and happiness
With a slightly juvenile rhetoric
Flick away the traces of tears flowing in darkness
Let the whisper in my thoughts spread
Add a little indulgence to the autumn colors of arts
Wind, eagerly awaiting in the cool air
Will soon knock at the door of love that lingers in our hearts